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1524.54 miles
you were my long distance love affair.
Run down by thoughts of you.
You recaptured my innocence, and took it back when you went away.
Memories forever etched into my brain.
Songs will never hold the same meaning again.
Songs that tell our story perfectly.
Ahhh to be young and in love again.
I'm 19 years old.
I am young.
I'll find love again.
But never a love like ours.
You loved me for me.
I loved you for you.
Didn't care what the world told us.
Did as we pleased.
Young.
And in love.
you were my long distance love affair.
Run down by thoughts of you.
You recaptured my innocence, and took it back when you went away.
Memories forever etched into my brain.
Songs will never hold the same meaning again.
Songs that tell our story perfectly.
Ahhh to be young and in love again.
I'm 19 years old.
I am young.
I'll find love again.
But never a love like ours.
You loved me for me.
I loved you for you.
Didn't care what the world told us.
Did as we pleased.
Young.
And in love.
Something short just to get out some sort of emotion. It's not very good. I also just got sick of looking at my ID twice on the same page.
© 2004 - 2024 inconspicuous
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Good poem. Makes me sad though because no one has ever loved me, and it seems like it will never happen. Well, at least you've had love.
I'd work on your structure/format though. Ad some rhymes, mabey some format of some sort, I dunno, it lacks structure would be my only complaint.
I'd work on your structure/format though. Ad some rhymes, mabey some format of some sort, I dunno, it lacks structure would be my only complaint.